为了让一些欧洲人和美国人知道南京大屠杀,请速帮忙润色此段

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I know that the happy Christmas is coming now.I don't want to make you feel uncomfortable.But as a Chinese ,I decide to tell you some cruel but true history during the World War 2.Because I heard of that a lot of European
don't know that,I feel sad.
I hope you can go to http://www.nj1937.org/english/default.asp
Maybe you can't believe that.And the Japanese
goverment and some young Japanese
always say that is not the truth.They want to have a good 形象 in the world. Compared with the German government
,Japanese government is much more ugly .

有的知识还没有教,所以就这样水平。但我要发给我一些外国网友的。 如果能增添一些好的更确切的句子,我可以再多加50分!谢谢!为了能让更多人知道历史!!

你好!以下是我帮你做的修改。不知你还有没有什么需要补充的?
The happy Christmas is coming / around the corner .I bless you and give you my best wishes firstly. Then I want to tell you something special during the World War Ⅱ. Do you know The Nanjing Massacre 1937 in China.As a Chinese ,I should tell you the truth.
Please visit http://www.nj1937.org/english/default.asp to get more information about the truth.
Maybe you can't believe it becausethe Japanese goverment and some young Japanese always say that is not the truth.They want to keep a good image in the world. Compared with the German government ,Japanese government is much more ugly .

i feel so cold inside. 形象 image
you can imagine that a large of population died in the bloody massacred.
Maybe you couldn't understand it ,let me take a example:one day , you were bitten by a dog,but when you go to see the host who has the dog