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这是我写的稿子
我英语比较差
稿子写的比较不流畅 还有好多语法错误
诸位能不能帮忙润润色？？
谢了
稿子如下
The most unforgettable party I have ever been to
Actually, I have ever been to such a party for only once. It was on the night of November 30th, two months after I became a college student, that I struck by an exciting party the first time in my life. In fact, it could be called a ball more than a general party.
My classmates of high school who also studied at BNU as a Physics major held the party. They invited my roommates and me to there. On that unusual night, we left the dormitory together and arrived at the exact place early. It was in our refectory. There were already so many people waiting there and talking loudly. Before long the music came up. After some interesting performances given by the host, people started to dance fervidly. Attracted by the scenery full of passion, we joined them as well. As none of my roommates knew how to dance, we decided to act in ou
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The most unforgettable party I have ever been to
To tell the truth, I have only been to a party for just once in my life. It was on the night of November 30th, two months after I entered the college. The exciting party did not fail to fascinate me. To put it more exact, it was a ball.
My high-school classmates who also study at BNU held the party. They invited my roommates and me there. On that unusual night, we left the dormitory together and arrived at the cafeteria where the ball was held quite early. But there were already crowds of people waiting there, talking loudly. Before long, the music blared out. After some interesting performance given by the host, people started to dance enjoyably. Affected by the scenery, we joined them as well. As none of my roommates knew how to dance, we decided to act in our own way. We just formed a circle and jumped hand in hand or put our hands on the guys’ shoulders in front of us and run together so that we lo