UC知道英语高手来看看下面这段话有什么问题,还请帮忙修改
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My name is Jeff, 26 years old , I am a chinese , I have extensive habits , for example play soccer, singing, watch DVD and so on.. now I want to know some foreign friends here, whatever who you are , wherever you come from, so long as you are coming here for learning chinese , to know chinese culture , history. Maybe we could be good friend. I will show you all about the china is which you want to know, of course you should introduce your country for me by way of your respond. If you have interest with this notice , pls contact me. i will bring a nice memory to you in china
1楼的 雪白色精灵 是典型的中国人,(喜欢有点什么就看不起别人,hehe)没关系我不介意. 但还是感谢她帮我修改了几句,还希望高手们能多多指教 :)
My name is Jeff, 26 years old , I am a chinese , I have extensive habits , for example play soccer, singing, watch DVD and so on.. now I want to know some foreign friends here, whatever who you are , wherever you come from, so long as you are coming here for learning chinese , to know chinese culture , history. Maybe we could be good friend. I will show you all about the china is which you want to know, of course you should introduce your country for me by way of your respond. If you have interest with this notice , pls contact me. i will bring a nice memory to you in china
1楼的 雪白色精灵 是典型的中国人,(喜欢有点什么就看不起别人,hehe)没关系我不介意. 但还是感谢她帮我修改了几句,还希望高手们能多多指教 :)
extensive habits 改为wide interests
play soccer, singing, watch DVD and so on改为playing soccer, singing, watching movies and so on
now, i want to make friends with foreign people here.
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晕，看不下去了。