求强人润色这段话（英文），改的好追加100

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My enthusiasm for doing pharmaceutical research comes from one of my female apprentice, She used to be majored in biological science too, but since she study abroad in USA, she change to pursue PhD in pharmaceutical science. I learned a lot about pharmaceutical research from her, like drug efficacy, drug safety and drug design. And I found pharmaceutical research is much more attractive to me than my recent research, because unlike my research about microorganism, it is human oriented and people can benefit from our research directly. From this chance, I found my real interest.

只要意思对，可以大改。
我晕，是让润色这段文字，不是翻译成中文。这是我自己写的，因为觉得写的不够好，所以请大家帮忙修改润色。“female apprentice”是表示师姐的意思，不是女助手。

润色如下：

My passion for pharmaceutical research has much to do with one of my female apprentices. She used to major in biological science, but after she went abroad to America, she began to pursue PhD in pharmaceutical science. I learned a lot about pharmaceutical research from her such as drug efficacy, drug safety and drug design, etc. And I found pharmaceutical research attracts me much more than my recent research, because unlike my research about microorganism, it is human oriented and people can benefit from our research directly. It is due to this coincedence that I have come to know my real interest.

我对药学的兴趣来自我的一位女助手。她以前和我一样，都是生物主课毕业的。不过，因为她在美国上了一段学，她改行学了博士级药学。我从她身上学到了很多药学知识，例如药物疗效，药物安全，和药物设计。并且，我意识到研究药学要比我最近研究的东西更有吸引力。因为不像生物学研究的微生物，药学以人类为主因此人类能够直接从它获益。这次与我助手交流的机会使我找到了我真正的兴趣。