UC知道帮我找错（英语文章）
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这我才写的 怕有语法错误 我读初一
Do you really not like school? My favourite subject is English
and science.You must study them unless you are a fool.Study them you will make some happy .If you feel tired ,you can play with your dog. But you can't play with your dog every day.Hurrp up,you should study them. Cheer up, you can do better then others.
Do you really not like school? My favourite subject is English
and science.You must study them unless you are a fool.Study them you will make some happy .If you feel tired ,you can play with your dog. But you can't play with your dog every day.Hurrp up,you should study them. Cheer up, you can do better then others.
Do you really not like school?(第一句就错了..没有这种说法的,改为Do you really dislike school?
My favourite subject is English and science.(两门功课，is改为are
You must study them unless you are a fool.Study them you will make some happy (意思不同，不可以用中文角度来写英语文章！，我这么改：You should study hard then you can find a lot of fun.
Hurrp up,you should study them. Cheer up, you can do better then others.(同样毛病，改成：Try your best to do it , you'll be the best one.
另外我没看出有什么问题