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Now, he takes Computer Science as a more challenging field and desires to pursue studies and devotes to new intellectual adventure in it. I respect his decision and support his choice of your M. A. program. In a field other than his undergraduate major I still believe he will make an excellent student and I would appreciate your favorable considerarions to her application.

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