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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/16 14:21:17
Hello, everyone, the winter that is in this chill a girl who owns the fire similar and warm public is she always of dream and station here, she liked to be silly smile since the childhood, liked to make friend, also liked a guest a top at own 博 to resolve some small problems for everyone, however her ising the most favorite is herself that boy's the personality of the son sort, usually on the basketball court natural and unrestrained 1, but had no too high elevation but was usually covered a hat, this was I, loving a lot of has been thinking with the sky an intimate and contiguous 18 years old girl, oh!Still need to tell everyone a small secret oh, I but the school of arts in the school of science is high to just living, having already had the honor of acquiring the bond maid professor's title

大家好，在这样一个寒冷的冬季一个拥有火一样温暖人心的女孩为她一直的梦想而站在这里，从小她都喜欢傻笑，喜欢交朋友，也喜欢在自己的博客上为大家解决一些小问题，不过她最喜欢的就是她自己那男孩子般的性格，常常在篮球场上潇洒一把，但没有太高的海拔而常常被盖帽，这就是我，爱好很多却一直想与天空亲密接触的18岁女生，噢！还要告诉大家一个小秘密噢，我可是理科中的文科

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Hello, everyone, in such a chilly winter a girl with a heart warming fire is standing here for dream ever.She has been laughing naively ever since her childhood,enjoying making friends, solving problems on her blog for others. However, what she enjoys most is her boy-like personality , often playing basketball handsomely on the basketball court,though she often gets blocked shots because she is not tall enough. This is me , a girl of 18 with many hobbies and a wish to have a close contact with the sky. oh!I have got a secret to let out—I am top student of arts in science class. I have been honoured with the title— maid professor.