帮我改改这句话

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/05 16:06:10
Furthermore, working experience, which gives me a solid platform to prepare for my career pursuit, does great help to further my understanding of software systems and improves my professional skills, and it makes my goal become much clearer.

我总觉得这句话不通顺，尤其是and it makes my goal become much clearer这个地方，怎么改好呢？

and it makes my goal much clearer

and it has been a great help to my realiszation of my future goals.

建议改成and it makes my goal much more certain.
不过你那句也没错。

Furthermore,My working experience has gives me a solid platform for prepare my career pursuit,it is a great help for me and my further understanding of software systems and it improves my professional skills,therefore, lets my future goals become much clearer.

I think that's Better !

Furthermore, working experience, which gives me a solid platform to prepare for the pursuit of my career, is a great help to further my understanding of software systems and improves my professional skills. Also, it makes my goal much clearer.