“电信行业存在的问题及治理对策分析”的英文怎么说？

the analysis on the problems and solutions of electricommunication industry

电信行业存在的问题及治理对策分析

On Problems with Telecommunication Industry and their Countermeasures 【推荐】

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Analysis on Problems with Telecommunication Industry and their Countermeasures

Analysis about the issues in Telecom Industry and the settlement.
电信行业的问题分析及解决方案。

在写作时，分析问题肯定要先列明问题。这样表达更清晰明了，中文也是。

The analysis of the problems and sloving stragedies in the tele-commucation field

Analysis on the problems in Telecommunication Industry and the way to get rid of them