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Hello teachers！Today, I’d like to share with you my product designed by myself. As we know, the Olympic Games will come soon. I’m very proud of being a student of Beijing, and I think that I should do something for the 2008 Olympics. Let’s share my product first. Do you know what it is? Of course, they’re five rings. Its name’s five ring classification dustbin. It’s convenient to separate all kinds of domestic garbage. This product is made of wrappers of chips. I collected the wrappers after ate chips and used them to make dustbin.
It’s not difficult to make. First of all, I washed the wrappers of chips and stuck them into the shape. Secondly, I labled this dustbin carefully. Finally, the classifiction dustbin is finished.
We usually classify waste into batteries, paper, metal, plastic and peels. The classification of garbage becomes simple by using this dustbin.
It’s very simple, but it has many b

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Hello teachers (Hello everyone更地道)！Today, I’d like to share with you my product designed by myself（I'd like to present my product designed by myself to you）. As we(you) know, the Olympic Games will come soon. I’m very proud of being a student of Beijing, and I think that I should do something for the 2008 Olympics. Let’s(let me) share my product first. Do you know what it is(Guess what is it?)? Of course, they’re five rings. Its name's (name is)five ring classification dustbin. It’s convenient to separate all kinds of domestic garbage(garbages). This product is made of wrappers of chips. I collected the wrappers after ate chips and used them to make dustbin.
It’s not difficult to make. First of all, I washed the wrappers of chips and stuck them into the shape. Secondly, I labled this dustbin carefully. Finally, the classifiction dustbin is finished.
We usually classify waste into batteries, paper, metal, plastic and peels. The classification of garba