UC知道帮忙检查病句!急!在线等!
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/28 02:00:09
How to do,you really give me your lover.
How many times,you really konw that I love you veryhard.
How long time, you can missing me.
When we are old, Can you missing me that one boy was loveing you!
Do you know, I`m missing you everyday,
baby won't you tell me why?love is one big illusion!
Baby won't you tell me why? there is sadness in your eyes.I don't wanna say goodbey to you. love is one big illusion! l should try to forget. but there is something left in my head. You're the one who set it up. now you're the one to make it stop. I'm the one who's feeling lost right now. Now you want me to forget. every little thing you said. but there i
Can you missing me that one boy was loveing you!
can you miss me.
光看了第一段就很想死，完全不通顺，不知道再讲什么。除了最后一句以外（出自歌词）
很多语法错误啊 第二句，give me your lover?
lover是情人 爱人的意思。
整篇文章看起来汉语式英语了有点……
本来看了题目想进来改的。结果看了1小段，起了一身鸡皮。对不起楼主了，我说PASS了。
二：love
三：very hard
四：can miss
When we get old, Will you miss a boy who loved you!
Baby won't you tell me why there is sadness in your eyes.I don't wanna say goodby to you. love is one big illusion that l should try to forget. But there is something left in my head. You're the one who set it up.However,now you're the one who wana make it stop. I'm the one who's feeling lost right now. Now you want me to forget. every little thing you said. but there is something left in my mind. I won't forget the way in which you kissed me. the feeling's so strong that it will last for so long! l'm not the man ur heart is attaching to! That's why you go away,l know.You were never