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2. Thank you very much for your letter of 15 January, which we received today. In answer to your enquiry we have pleasure in enclosing an information pack, giving full details of our services. If you would like any further information, do please contact me by phone or in writing and I will be pleased to help. I hope that our services will be of interest to you and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
3. There are a number of queries that I would like to raise about your products and I would be grateful if you could ask a representative to get in touch with me with a view to discussing these queries and hopefully placing an order if the queries are satisfactorily answered.
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Yours sincerely,
3. There are a number of queries that I would like to raise about your products and I would be grateful if you could ask a representative to get in touch with me with a view to discussing these queries and hopefully placing an order if the queries are satisfactorily answered.
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Thank you very much for your letter of enquiry dated 15，enclosed please find a pack which contains full details of our services.For more information, please contact me by phone or E-mail, any question by you will be treated seriously and answered soon. I hope that you would be interested in our services and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
I would like to raise some questions about your products, it would be grateful if you could send a representative to get in touch with me to help me understand your goods.Hopefully we may place an order if the questions are satisfactorily answered.
queries,用得非常少，词本身带有些许质问的语气。商务信函简单明了即可，您整个洋洋洒洒 恩多个“and" 只会让对方看得头疼……
写商务信函，不要把中国的句式加进去。enquiry 没错，一楼说的那个也可以用。一样的道理。
enquiry 拼错了 inquiry