一个英语语法问题!

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Lily is a beautiful girl,is also the most excellent student in her class.
这句话的语法对吗?那个逗号以及后面的"is also"用得对吗?

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Lily is a beautiful girl,and she is also the most excellent student in her class. 但是这个太繁琐,不用...
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Lily is a beautiful girl and also the most excellent student in her class. 相当于两个句子,省略了she is
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Lily is a beautiful girl who is also the most excellent student in her class. 定于从句

为什么要用","啊
这个语句已经连接的很紧密了
如果一定要用应该是要把is去掉的

,取代了 and she
是不太严谨的语法

is also 是对的.但要在is also前加个who.因为这里是个非限定性定语从句.而原句is also the most excellent student in her class. 中缺少主语,加之从句的先行词是Lily,是人,所以主语用关系代词who.如果先行词是物则用what.

逗号后面的“is also"用得不对，因为你的句中有两个并列结构，is a beautifu,...is also...并列结构要用and连接。
正确的应该是：

Lily is a beautiful girl,and also the most excellent student in her class.