把一般现在时改成一般过去时

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That is that I am very unforgettable one day. On the morning, I get rid of the smooth dog of park , the weather is very good. Some strike Tai Ji's, some play badminton , some play football , people is all doing the different thing. My one people has been at home at the noon , I have bought vegetable and flesh , has acted as one bowl face , its very delicious. Afternoon , I are very idle , the friend invites me to go and play basketball , I am highly pleased. I am tired out very much since completing basketball , I am very joyful but. How colored , meaningful this is one day.
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That was a very unforgettable day. On the morning, I got rid of a smooth dog of park , and the weather was very good. Some stroke Tai Ji's,and some played badminton . some played football , and people is all doing the different thing. i has been at home until noon , I bought some vegetable and flesh , which acted as one bowl face , it was very delicious. Afternoon , I was very idle , because my friend invited me to go out and play basketball , I was highly pleased. I tired out very much until completing basketball , I was very joyful but. How colored , meaningful it is today.

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