情人节送女友的 大家看看这句话有语法错误吗,表达地道吗?

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/09/25 12:35:20
Miss XXX:
Happy Valentine's Day!
Though I am not sure whether there can be a romance of us,I still wish that the girl I love will be increasingly brilliant and pleased!
Lovingly yours
XXX
虽然我也不知道我们之间是否可能,但是我衷心祝愿我喜欢的女孩越长越漂亮,生活越来越幸福!
romance前不能加A吧?

哦，好有心啊，原你如愿：） 建议可改为：
Miss XXX:
Happy Valentine's Day!
Though I am not sure whether there can be a romance of us, still I wish my beloved girl to be happier and prettier!
love,
XXX
romance可以加a的

Though I am not sure whether there will be romance between us, I always wish that the girl I love will be increasingly brilliant and happy!