帮助修改下小演讲稿的内容

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/23 11:58:20
I arrived at Adelaide for eight days and this is my fifth lesson. however, it is a big change to view of English for me in this short time before I have gone to here. Because I find a fact that if you are good at English, you can get a job with well-pay easier, compare to other people in China. However, when you come to Australia, everything is changed. English is not advanced skill for you but a so basal skill for living and studying. So I will be not spend more time on doing something else, but learn English first and with other skills. In that case, I learn something will faster and better!

告诉下 哪写的不好 哪里可以换种方式表达。

基本意思我看懂了，如果在注意语法和一些表达会更好，以下根据你的稿子做了些修改，保持原文意思，可供你参考：
I have been in Adelaide for eight days and this is my fifth lesson. To be frank, my view on English has changed a lot since I came here. I mean ,In China ,if you are good at English, you can get a well-paid job easier However, when you come to Australia, things are different. English is not a advanced skill for you but a very basic skill for living and learning. So I will take English in the first place and spend more time learning English as well. In that case, I believe I will learn other things faster and better!

英语不好没法帮你，祝你好运！