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Shopping online has a lot of advantages
Shopping online has a lot of advantages. It is very convenient, economical, and there are enough goods. Firstly, shopping online is very convenient. You will not go to the shopping centre and the worker that working in net shop will carry the goods to get to your house and give them to you when you pay for them. Convenient it is, more and more people would like to shop online and many net shops are set such as www.8848.com, www.paipai.com and www.ebay.com. Further more, it is very economical because it saves many steps, Because of the fewer workers, many goods are very cheap. People will not take buses, taxies or by motorbike, it saves petrol, so it is economical. Finally, there are enough goods for people t
Shopping online has a lot of advantages
Shopping online has a lot of advantages. It is very convenient, economical, and there are enough goods. Firstly, shopping online is very convenient. You will not go to the shopping centre and the workers that work in the net shop will carry the goods to your house when you pay for them. Convenient it is, more and more people would like to shop online and many net shops are founded , such as www.8848.com, www.paipai.com and www.ebay.com. Further more, it is very economical since it saves many steps, Because of the fewer workers, cheaper goods(保持一致，要么两个都用短语，要么都用句子). It is unnecessary to take buses, taxis to the shop . It will save petrol.(so it is economical)(去掉，罗嗦). Finally, there are enough goods for people to