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Since the day I arrived , I learn a lot here. At first I was afraid of talking to the native speakers. But it is unbelievable with always speak Chinese. So I try to talk with others with English. The first problem I got is I bought a mobile phone card and as the time goes by, I spent all the money in the SIM card. But I do not know what I can say for that. I just think it in my mother language, so I told the saleswoman: “I want to put money in my mobile phone.” and the lady understood me. I was so pleased with that. With anther couple of days, I learned the native words “top-up” by chances. So I try to use it. In the main time I learned another new word “voucher”. I am quite happy with that. It is a fresh experience that I have never met.
I know I have lots of things to learn in English. And my vocabulary is so narrow, not enough for me. With the experience I got, I see talking to the native speakers is not as difficult as I thought. The more I talk the

1.Since I arrived , I have learn a lot here.
2.But it is unbelievable to always speak Chinese in a foreign country.
3.in English
4The first problem I met with is that...and as time went by
5do not know --did not know
6 can--could
7I just think ---thought
8mother language--mother tongue
9With anther couple of days--after another couple of days
10. by chances.--chance
11.So I try to use it. --Then I tried to use it
12 the native word "top -up
13.by chances --by chance
14in the main time--in the meantime
15my vocabulary is so narrow---linited
16With the experience I got, I see talking to the native speakers is not as difficult as I thought. -----With my experiences increasing,I find talking to the native speakers is not as difficult as I thought.
17.And reading is also very important---What's more,reading is .....
18books is our friend---books are ...
19 am sure if I reading more Engli