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My Uncle’s Garden

Lights of a wonderful day
Pour your streams on this sweet place
Make this little heaven open her bright eyes
Make this secret garden recover her lovely pace
Tender night has slide away
Here comes another summer day
See, jasmines can not wait to share
Sweet dreams tonight
Sunflowers open their buds and happily cry
Stand a tiptoe to the sky
Shy roses are steeping in dew’s smile
While the lightsome lark sings
“Here I arrive”
Oh, how good if I were a bee
Then I will slow down my pace
Enjoy this little world
And stay

叔叔的花园

美妙的时光
让流经这片沃土的水纯净
让这个小天堂睁开她明亮的双眼
让这个神秘的花园记录她可爱的脚步
宁静的夜，悄悄的溜走了
另一个夏日来到
看，茉莉花颇不急待的想要与别人分享她的芬芳
今晚做个好梦
太阳花吐露花蕊，愉快的哭了
踮起脚，更接近天空
娇羞的玫瑰沉浸在露珠的微笑中
百灵鸟欢快的歌场
“我来了”
哦，如果我是蜜蜂该多么好，
我会放慢我的速度
享受这个小小的世界
逗留其中

可不可以多加点分呀