谁能帮我纠正一下错误?(英语作文)

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What is the most important thing in our life? I think it is the happiness. Of course, our life may be boring and monotonous, but we should find meaningful thins and things who make us happy in our life. Maybe some people will say, I never have any happy things, why is the world so unfair? But we should know, happiness actually is a simple thing. If we want it we will find it. It is just everywhere. Remember, happiness consists incontentment. Why is one person always upset? Maybe because he is often dissatisfied, so please be satisfied, happiness will come around you.

晕 你分真多...前面100的 现在又80
100的我给你答了

and things who make us happy in our life

who 改成 what

I never have any happy things

any 改成 some (不是很确定)

why is the world so unfair

改成 why the world is so unfair

happiness consists incontentment 这句不懂啥意思...
incontentment 毋庸置疑的

Why is one person always upset

is 改成 does

happiness will come around you

around 改成 to

I think it is the happiness. 改成 I think it is happiness

but we should find meaningful thins and things who make us happy in our life 改成 but we should be able to find meaningful things and things that can make us happy in our life

Maybe some people will say, I never have any happy things 改成 Some people may say that they never had any happy things happen to them

大致结构建议你也改一下，不瞒你说写的不怎么样

What is the most important thing in our life? I think it is (the)(省略掉) happiness.