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A Bad Phenomenon: Misunderstanding between Children and Parents
According to a recent poll, 73 percent of Chinese children have been misunderstood by their parents; and it is still going up in our society .It seems like a very serious problem in China. And this phenomenon is nearly bothering every family.
There are two main reasons about the reason why this phenomenon happened in our society .The first one is that many parents and children do not have enough time to communicate with each other. Nowadays, lots of parents have to get up early in the morning so as their children; and their minds are always occupied by different things. Therefore they do not have enough time to talk with each other. That is a main reason why children are easily been misunderstood by their parents. The second one is that many parents do not have a right way to communicate with their children. Many parents would like to “educate” their children in a more violence way, or even do not bothered by th
According to a recent poll, 73 percent of Chinese children have been misunderstood by their parents; and it is still going up in our society .It seems like a very serious problem in China. And this phenomenon is nearly bothering every family.
There are two main reasons about the reason why this phenomenon happened in our society .The first one is that many parents and children do not have enough time to communicate with each other. Nowadays, lots of parents have to get up early in the morning so as their children; and their minds are always occupied by different things. Therefore they do not have enough time to talk with each other. That is a main reason why children are easily been misunderstood by their parents. The second one is that many parents do not have a right way to communicate with their children. Many parents would like to “educate” their children in a more violence way, or even do not bothered by th
意思对了
如果描述理由方面的句式多点变化,或者说多用多结构的复合句子,什么定语从句啊,同位语等等会更好,稍微润色一下文章吧
意思对了,如果描述理由方面的句式多点变化,或者说多用多结构的复合句子,什么定语从句啊,同位语等等会更好,润色一下文章吧
好可以，但感觉BODY一块应该再讨论一些，还有最后一段最好先跟前面的衔接一下，再提出解决办法。但我有一个疑问你看起来只有TOPIC却没有topic sentence和controlling idea