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Internet

Nowadays, Internet is getting into people’s life and becoming more and more popular. Human being can't live a single day without the internet, in a society with the information technology highly developing, it make our life more splendid, and it plays an important role in our life; when we enjoy the pleasure of the net bringing to us, we should not neglect the harm it may bring us. Hackers will cause troubles to the Internet and even people’s life.
The widely use of the Internet brought a great convenient to us. Some school have already got involved in distance learning education.①CompuHigh, founded in 1994, bills itself as the world's first online high school.\ Since many people live apart from their friends, and can't meet each other often, OICQ becomes a chat tool. More and more people use online chat to communicate with friends. ②Reuter's Singapore electricity: The professional network think factory declares on September 3, NetValue200

Internet

Nowadays, Internet is getting into people’s life and becoming more and more popular. Human being can't live a single day without the internet, in a society with the information technology highly developing, it make our life more splendid, and it plays an important role in our life; when we enjoy the pleasure of the net bringing to us, we should not neglect the harm it may bring us. Hackers will cause troubles to the Internet and even people’s life.
The widely use of the Internet brought a great convenient to us. Some school have already got involved in distance learning education.①CompuHigh, founded in 1994, bills itself as the world's first online high school.\ Since many people live apart from their friends, and can't meet each other often, OICQ becomes a chat tool. More and more people use online chat to communicate with friends. ②Reuter's Singapore electricity: The professional network think factory declares on September 3, NetValue