请大家帮忙看看这里面有没有不正确的地方

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/22 07:56:17
I don't miss you,don't love you.The people who will stay with you for the rest of life is not me.Maybe I'm crazy,I don't remember the happy memory of us.Now,I'm wondering how to make me strong.I'm a craven.I can't face to the truth.I can't find my heart.I'm no longer the girl that I was.I can't give you a promise which is timeless.I even don't know what's my purpose.Sometimes,I think I'm a bad people.I always be lonely.

I don't you how much it hurts you.Now I apologize to you.I know you can't see it.But I find my heart and my answer finally.I want to die.But I'm afraid I can't get to the heaven.So I don't dare to die.I have many responsibility.I have a work that haven't finished.

I am sorry.Cause I can't give you a happy ending.

I am not honest.

I am a bad guy.Please forget me!

各位大虾看看这里面有没有语法问题啊...
帮忙改一下好不好~！
帮忙指出不恰当的地方，谢谢~！

有些搭配不是很恰当，但是单个翻译过来的单词没有错误，总体不错，但没有语法的错误。

补充： many responsibility应改为many
responsibilities

stay with没有这种连接用法，改为will be stayed with

memory是储存器，亦借指“记忆”，recollection是正规的用法
recollection
n.
回忆, 记忆, 回想

strong的解释是强壮，前面的craven意思是胆小鬼，你说明的意思是“我诧异什么使我勇敢、无畏，我曾是胆小鬼。”，他俩个词不是反义词，fearless是勇敢的，无畏的，应该为I'm wondering how to make me fearless。

还在检查。。。

I don't you how much it hurts you中的I don‘t you 什么意思啊，是不是打错了？？等您补充

语法上讲：
先说Stay with是对的，没错，而且stay不用被动
前面也都说得过去
face 及物，所以应为face the truth
even don't 换成 don't even.
people换成person
I ALWAYS 变成 I'LL ALWAYS
I don't you how much it hurts you 不通顺，换成 I don't know how much it has hurt you.
I find 变成 I've found
the heaven不加冠词
many responsibilities
I have a work that haven't finished. work这里不可数，所以应该是 I have work that isn't yet finished.

语意上的
The people who will stay = T