急急急 !!!!!!帮忙看看有没有语法错误,机械勿扰!谢谢!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/03 23:45:00
Dear Sir/Madam,
We understand from your information posted on Google .com that you are in the market for refractories material. We would like to take this opportunity to introduce our company and products, with the hope that we may work with Bright Ideas Imports in the future.
We are a joint venture specializing in the manufacture and export of refractories. We have enclosed our catalog, which introduces our company in detail and covers the main products we supply at present. You may also visit our online company introduction at http://mdnlnh.com which includes our latest product line.
Should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know. We will be happy to give you a quotation upon receipt of your detailed requirements.
Hope to hear good news from you.
We thank you very much for you attention and look forward to your reply soon.
Sincerely,

语法错误是没什么.就是有些用法不常出现,比如最后的那句这样会不会好些:we are thankful for your attention to our growing company and are now looking forward to your extra suggestions.