一段中文翻译成英文的告白(是否正确,帮我修改一下)

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梦已醒,我知道该如何去珍惜,放弃和奋斗,我会好好完成自己的路,请你以后不要在欺骗我,但是已经不重要了,好好照顾自己,不要太依赖别人,追求自己的真爱
翻译一:Peter has dreams, I know how to cherish and give up and struggle, I will properly completed its own way, you will not deceiving me, but has not important, and to take good care of themselves, and not too dependent on others, to pursue their true love
翻译二:dream already wake up,i know how to go cherish,give up and strive.i also may finish mu road. you do not deceive to me,but has not important,look after yourself well, and not too dependent on others,seeking after you is real love
上面都是我写的,小弟英文不太好,各位大侠看看对不对,
有没有更好的

个人认为不太对,帮您又写了一个

梦已醒,我知道该如何去珍惜,放弃和奋斗,
I have already become awake from the dream,now I know how to treasure(珍惜珍贵的东西常用),give up and struggle,
我会好好完成自己的路,请你以后不要在欺骗我,但是已经不重要了,好好照顾自己,不要太依赖别人,追求自己的真爱
I will go on (completing/finishing my choice),please don't cheat me any more, although everything is of no importance any longer, just take care of yourself and don't depend others too much.You should go to persue your true love.

希望您能满意

I've already woken up from the dream, and I know how to cherish, to give up and to strive. I will have a good life from now on, please don't deceive me anymore. however, it is not important now, what's important is you should take care of yourself and don't rely too much on other people. I hope you can find your true love

dream has already waken up.i know how to cherish, give up and strive.i will finish my own way. please don't cheat me any more, but it is no longer important,take go