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one night.my friend call me.he said:"what are you doing?"I answer:"I am watching Prison Break on TV.what is going on?"he said:"nothing,I just want to know this.I am reading newspaper."I said:"what?I don't know what are you talking about.So,bye-bye!"Let me tell you:This person is really bored !

one night,my friend called me,"what are you doing?"he asked,"I am watching Prison Break on TV.what is going on?""nothing,I just want to know this.I am reading newspaper.""what?I don't understand what are you talking about.So,bye-bye!"Let me tell you:This person is really bored !
英语的对话和中文不一样,不能写成----我说:"...." 他说:"....."用“”隔开足以表达
还有就是注意时态 从你的文章中可以看出 那个人还真是无聊那,呵呵

one night.my friend called me.he said:"what are you doing?"I answered:"I am watching Prison Break on TV.what is going on?"he said:"nothing,I just want to know it.I am reading a newspaper."I said:"what?I don't know what you are talking about.So,bye-bye!"Let me tell you:This person is really boring

one night.my friend called me.He said,'what are you doing?' I answered,'I am watching Prison Break on TV.What's going on?'He said,'Nothing.I just want to know this.I am reading new