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题目:Some people enjoy change, and they look forword to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approch do you prefer? Exlain why.

正文: Some people enjoy change, but others not. In my opinion, not only in daily life, but also in other fields such as scientific study, it is very important for us to explore new method or place. There are some advantages for the man who have creative brain.
First, science needs creation. There are so many historical examples to prove the importance of creation in scientific breakthrough and experiments. On the contrary, if a resercher don't like change, and always copy other's work, he may be put into prison because of copyright.
Second, more experience can accelerate one's growing up. Try it, and you can be successful. If one dare not explore new field, he may not be injured, but he would never know whether he

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