谁能帮忙找错.英文的
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in the spring. The water is very warm. the trees was going to be green. Some tadpole saw a duck play with his mother. So .he asked the little duck.:” did you see my mother? What did she look like? The duck said: ” well, your mother had two big eyes and a big mouth. “thanks, the tadpole said. After some time. He found a fish. So he ask the fish.” are you my mother?” “No,I am not your mother. because your mother has four legs.!” “thank you!” the tadpole said. They went straight the water. And saw a frog. he said :” are you my mother?” the frog said “yes. baby.! I am your mother. In the future , when you grow up. You will be able to look like me .”
“Yeah .”the tadpole said. He was very happy.
Spring was warm. A frog woke up, She was so hungry that she wanted to find something to eat.
Water was very warm in Spring. Trees are getting green. Some tadpole saw a little ducky was playing with his mother. They asked the little ducky:"Did you see our mother? What does she look like?" The little ducky said:"Well, your mother has two big eyes and a big mouth."
"Thanks ."said the tadpole. Later, they saw a fish, so they asked the fish:" Are you our mother?" The fish said:"No, I am not your mother, your mother has four legs."
“Thank you!” said the tadpole. They kept on going. Then they saw a frog. They asked:” Are you our mother?” The frog said “Yes, baby.! I am your mother. You will just look like me when you've grown up.”
“Yeah .”said the tadpole. They were so happy that they finally found their mother .
整篇文章的中文痕迹很浓。我只是改了一些明显的语法错误和明显不对的语顺。不知你意在何处?如果只是改错, 还可以说得过去;如果是想写一篇英语的童话故事