UC知道帮我改两篇英语作文，好了+50
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Have a good manner
Everyone knows the Games of the 29th Olympiad in 2008 are awarded to the city of Beijing. Most Chinese have a god manner now, but there are still some Chinese have a bad manner.
China is renowned worldwide for her beautiful landscape and her reputation as a nation of courtesy. However, today her land remains beautiful, but many of her citizens have lost the courtesy that had earned them respect in the past.
I remember, there was a report three years ago. After the National Day, there were 600,000 chewing gums on Tiananmen Square. If the foreigner sees these, how will they think about it?
Be showed from this, manners are important to cope with relations among people. No one likes a person with bad manners. A person with good manners never laughs at people when they are in trouble instead. He tries to of for help when he asks for something, he always “thanks”. He does not interrupt other people when they are talking
找老师改不就行了吗？
不错的文章，就是有点长
是啊，文章不错就是有错误。
Have a good manner
Everyone knows the Games of the 29th Olympiad in 2008 are awarded to the city of Beijing. Most Chinese have a good manner now, but there are still some Chinese have a bad manner.
China is renowned worldwide for her beautiful landscape and her reputation as a nation of courtesy. However, today her land remains beautiful, but many of her citizens have lost the courtesy that had earned them respect in the past.
I remember, there was a report three years ago. After the National Day, there were 600,000 chewing gums on Tiananmen Square. If the foreigner sees these, how will they think about it?
Be showed from this, manners are important to cope with relations among people. No one likes a person with bad manners. A person with good manners never laughs at people when they are in trouble instead. He tries to of for help when he asks for something, he always “thanks”. He does not interrupt other