请高手看看下面的英语有无毛病

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education instance:
Courses foreign trade English, English writing,
English reading, English speaking, English listening

foreign language:
be good at Japanese
skilled listen to English, say, to read, writes

computer:
skilled operates Windows 9x/NT/2000/XP/2003.
know well Office various software the operation.

是用在简历里吗?建议改成这样:

Education:
Degree in XX /Diploma in XX
Courses included:foreign trade English, English writing,
English reading, English speaking, English listening

language Skills:
Good at Japanese
Excellent English in listening,speaking, reading, and writing.

Computer Sills:
Good understanding of Windows 9x/NT/2000/XP/2003 and Microsoft Office.