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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/04 19:39:51
Recently, it is high price of some food products, such as pork, vegetable, noodle and so on. Besides, the price of rice have risen over 2%. It is serious the effects of people who makes lower money.

The reasons for high rice price are as follows
First, in major-rice-leading country lost production due to global warming, and also some illegal businessman store amount rice for better profits from shortage in supply.

Recently, price of foods goes high, such as pork, vegetable, noodle and so on. The price of rice have risen over 2%. This makes people lead a harder life, especially the poor people.

The reasons of the high rice price may be as follow:
First, the rice production has been deduced in major-rice-leading country due to the global warming. And also some illegal businessman store amount of rice for higher profits from shortage in supply.

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