刚写了一份英语简历,请看看这段有那些错误

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TNC co., JAPAN owned the wholly factory, it produces watchcases and fixes the TNC watch. When I working of the factory, my mostly job is used VISI-CAM and CNC, made new sample watchcases by the customers required appearance, contrived the new watchcase's design parameter and machining process and plot drawing.
I have participated in a discussion to advance productive efficiency. I given some reasonable advices, found the file of manage equipment and improved productivity.

TNC co., JAPAN owns the wholly factory, and it produces watchcases and fixes the TNC watch. When I worked for the factory, most parts of my job are using VISI-CAM and CNC, making new sample watchcases by the customers required appearance, contriving the new watchcase's design parameter and machining process and plot drawing.
I have participated in a discussion to advance productive efficiency. I gave some reasonable advices, foundeded the files of manage equipment and improved productivity.