英语高手帮帮忙!!!英语改错题!!!急用!!!很急!!!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/22 23:08:34
Illiteracy is the condition of being unable to read and write. Illiteracy is also used to describing the conditions of being ignorant or unknowledgeable in a particular subject or field. Computer illiteracy is the inability to use a computer programming languages.
Most of us who use computers know how to send emails, or how to create a new folder. But we know everything about programming languages, the artificial languages used to write instructions what can be executed by a computer. Even in technologically advancing countries, a very small percentage of computer users are able to read or write any kind of computer languages. Should we make the effort to learn a computer language, especially at when they are so complicated?
The answer is yes. Because of computer illiteracy, users are on the mercy of software manufacturers. Our society became more dependent on information technology, and in a few years’ time, reading and writing a computer language will be as essential as

第一行used to describe
第二行the condition
the third line, you should omit the article "a"
forth,there should be a comma before "but" instead of a period.
fifth, change "everyting" into "nothing"
sixth, what-->which
any-->one
omit "at"
on the mercy of-->at the mercy of任人摆布的意思
add a "has" before"became"
years'-->years
add a "don't" before know
omit "with"
correct