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You’re still work with me as usual.but my world is tatally changed when I’m stay with you.But i deeply know myself is introvert,I could not take off my face to say:I love you.i just selfishly show my careless about you ,just personally thougt that you can love me too.this time,my cool show make me lose you for I know there’s the another him is seeking after you.
During this days I’ve found many chances to appoint you .when I am in front of you ,I just to

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