求英语高手进~

昨天，我的英语老师说，任何人在成功之前都要付出超出常人的努力。郭敬明以全区第7名考入。郭敬明就读的高中的年级前150名会是重点大学的学生，而年级前30则是重点中的重点。

Yesterday, my English teacher told us that no one will success unless you pay much for it.As the 7th of all province, Guo Jingming enter the senoir school .In that pointed shool , the top 150 were more likey to get a place in the most popular universities and the ones who were before the 30th were the best of the best.

而郭敬明高中是年级前20名。高二高三连续获第三、四届“新概念作文大赛”一等奖。 高考考入上海大学。
In fact , Guo was the one of the top 20.In addition,he won the best reward in the 3rd and 4th "New Concept" writing competition while he was in his grade 11 and 12.Eventually , He entered the University of Shanghai .

It's said by my English teacher yesterday that,anyone who has been successful needed to pay the price beforehand.Guo jingming was the 7th highest scored person around the district when he got into high school.It's believed that the person who ranked before 150 in his hi