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I like to play basketball
Sports are the most popular activity all over the world. It’s including two kinds: one is mental sports, such as chess. And the other one is physical sports, such as soccer、basketball and American football.
Basketball is one of the most popular balls in the US, and now it’s very popular in China.
Playing basketball is very good for our health. When you play it, then you will know what I mean. If you play basketball, you will not catch a cold or get other illness easily. So we can study well and have a happy life.
Before I was nine, don’t like to play basketball. But one day, I was changed.
That was a cold day; everyone played basketball in the playground except me, because I hate the ball. PE teacher helped me catch the ball and shot at the basket. So I began to play basketball. I can’t forget him; he is the good person in my life.
I often play basketball in the playground at school. I usually play it will girls and

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