帮我修改英语作文(高中生)

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/17 18:13:26
是对出国留学的利弊分析:
Recently, more and more children will be sent to study abroad and their parent always want to give a good study place for practicing foreigner language to their children, but they lose sight of country culture they live.
Someone may say that it is a change for their children to learn more knowledge and exercise self-reliance ability.
However, they don’t realize that studying abroad will add the burden of domestic economy and neither you nor I believe the young don’t make mistake during studying abroad.
I don’t support go abroad. If a child wants to study sometime, he always will find a right way by himself.

Recently, more and more children ARE BEING sent to study abroad

their parent always want to give THEM a good study ENVIRONMENT for practicing FOREIGN language FOR their children

but they lose sight of THE country culture OF WHERE they live

Someone may say that it is a change for their children to learn more knowledge and TRY TO BE INDEPENDENT

I don’t support GOING abroad.

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去掉always
我才初三,也不能找到其他的e
give sth. to sb.的