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Partly to saying break up is always filled with sadly.
Of course i was no exception to the rule.Now i'm in hostile silence sitting in the clasroom .I've sent away my best friend .
When we stood at railroad,we hug with each other.I knew she was crying, so did i.she gave a note to me,but i put my hands out for it.
we gazed fixedly to one another. It's time for her to go i asked her to dismisive push towards the railway carriage.she kept on turnning round and looking her good-bye.
The train was slowly going away.Iwaved good-bye by sadly to her.
Goodbye,My firend
zhangliwei32 - 魔法学徒 一级
吊DB脑子有SHI
2楼那位,虽然我很感谢你重新写咯一篇
但是你没看请题目是修改
不是重写!!!!!

Basic principle, The word of "leave" is always filled up with sadness.
Certainly, I was not excepted from that rule. Now I am sitting in the classroom filled up with hostile silence. I have sent my best friend off.

We hug with each other beside the railroad. I knew she was crying, so did I. She gave a note to me, bur I put my hands out for it.

We gazed on each other deeply. Finally I reminded her it is the time to go, and I push her into the carriage. She was keeping turn round and look her good friend.

As the train was leaving slowly. I waved and part from her sadly.

Farewell, my friend

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