大家点评一下这份写给大使馆的信还通顺吗?希望指出点错误

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Dear visa officer barbara.dall
I am your applicant........
My visa has been lodged on 22/01/2008 and it has been three months till now,my school Start on April 27th,the time is near and the school authority have informed me to be three quickly Also I have already reserved the ticket,and make a study plane ,please contact whith me if anything about me is not avaible. It is so urgent so could you please speed up the processing time and give me the final result as sonn as possible?
My family and me looking forward to hearing good news from you soon

Kind regards
感谢大家的回信,我用邮件和传真两种方式与她取得了联系,一个小时她就给我回复了~Dear 。。。。。。,

I have already advised your agent that I am unable to finalise your
application at this time. I anticipate it will not be much longer,
however, you may need to apply for a letter of extension (to your current
start date) from your education provider. Travel arrangements should not
be confirmed before you

Dear Visa Officer (或者) Dear Ms. Dall 不要用人家的全名
My name is XXX, and I'm a visa applicant. I filed my visa application on Jan. 22, 2008 and it has been three months. My school starts on April 27 and there is little time left. School authority has contacted me several times and has asked me to get there as soon as possible. Also, I have already made a reservation for my plane ticket. Would you please be so kind to contact me about my application status? It is rather urgent so any assistance you could provide is highly appreciated.
My email address is XXXXXXX.
Thank you so much for your time and help.

Sincerely,
XXXX 你的名字

还有最好信里面带上你的申请文件的号码之类的以便使馆找你的文件。

最好以电子邮件+传真+电话沟通,三种方式同时联系大使馆签证处,以便尽快得到解决!祝你学业有成。
Dear Visa Officer,
Sorry to trouble you.
I'm an applicant of student visa named XXX(本人姓名). I have submitted all my application files on date of January 22, 2008. It has been about three months for me to wait for the re