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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/22 15:08:56
Surfing the Internet
As progress the word, we hand-on the network times. Now we already leave it. As an academician, I usually surf the Internet in my spare time.
Internet takes more and more part in our life nowadays. Through internet, we can chat, study, get information, get help, go shopping etc. Internet introduces me to a new world. In the past years, most of my knowledge has come from my teachers, but by surfing the Internet, I have learned more about science, life, and society.
In fact, surfing the Internet has become part of my life. Every day I spend some time on the Internet to get more knowledge.

冲浪互联网
作为进展总之,我们的手-论网络时代。现在我们已经离开它。作为一个院士,我通常网上冲浪在我的空闲时间。
互联网需要越来越多的一部分,在我们的生活现在。通过互联网,我们可以聊天,学习,获取信息,获得帮助,外出购物等互联网介绍我到一个新的世界。在过去几年里,我大部分的知识来自我的老师,而是由浏览互联网,我了解到更多关于科学,生命和社会。
事实上,在浏览网际网路已成为我生命的一部分。我每天都花一些时间在互联网上,以获得更多的知识。
不用改啦,很好