英语演讲比赛点评

your grammar is ok. It's worth mentioning that a boy gave a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, furthermore, he was fairly humorous and enthusiastic throughout the speech, and he made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech.

就你这个样也能被邀请啊,几年级啊,带看你水平来写吧,万一是个小学的在写成高中的多现眼啊

........no one will answer like this.....unless point out what's it about...........