请修改作文 my dream

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I seldom make dream ,I dont't know why, when I lay on my bed, I will go to sleep very quickly .
But when I studied in my middle school,I don't like this .
One night, I went to bed very eariler and thougt the movies star I like ,then ,I fell asleep .suddenly , I found I stood in the middle of a stage,I dressed very beautiful,like a princess.There were a great many pepple in the room.They were my funs,I was so happy when emcee told me I had won the award as the best woman singer , my funs were mad .They called my name ,gave me flowers and I waved to them . All the time,I kept the charming smile .and then,and then , you know , I woke up ,it's time to school. just a good dream .

I seldom dream and I don't know why. I always fall asleep right after laying on the bed. However, I did not feel this way back to secondary school when I focused on my study.
Once, I went to bed early thinking about one of the movie stars that I like, and then I fell asleep again as usual. All of a sudden, I found myself standing on the middle of a stage in a beautiful dress that made me like a princess. And a lot of my fans were in the hall to support me as well. I was so happy when I was told that I won the prize as the best singer, so were my fans.They were yelling out my name, and I, in turn, was waving to them. I kept a nice smile on my face throughout the time. Unfortunately, that was just a fansy dream as I woke up on the time for school as I always do.

时间仓促,不知道这样可不可以了。。。

I seldom make dream ,I dont't know why, when I lay on my bed, I will go to sleep very quickly .
But when I studied in my middle school,I don't like this .
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