请帮我完善下这句话，谢谢！

希望能帮到楼主
改动了一下
Further more,I am a hard-working student with a high responsiblity in doing things.Once I find the things of my interst within,no matter how difficult it is,and for me I will keep working and find the way towards the success

Further more , I am a hard working student. Especially when I do the things that I am interested in, I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is. I could concentrate on my study and I Believe I will succeeded in the end.

Further more , I am a hard working student, especially for doing things . I will try my best to finish what I am interested in no matter how difficult it is. I could concentrate myself on study and I believe that I can succeeded in the end.

这样感觉好一些.

最后的不错！~

ok

Chinese English!Very China.