找会英语的

For Chinese people, this year is very important, for we'll be having the Olympic Games in beijing.But I don't think this year we are lucky enough.As is known to all, strong earthquake hit Sichuan Province last week.Many people died and others buried in the ruins while few could get themselves moved, which is too bad!We were extremly sad at the heard of it. What a
terrible disaster!I think we should help those people. If everyone could give a bit love, the world would become more and more beautiful.I believe that all of us including you and me will make it!
(我是北外英语学院的^_^)

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For Chinese,this year is very important because we'll have the Olympic Games in Beijing.However it semms that this path full of hurtles.We all know the big earthquake happened in Sichuan Province last week left many people died and some are still lying under the wrecks waiting for rescure. The disasters terrified and saddened all of us! Indeed！But I