这封信有没有语法问题

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/04 09:35:06
hi!i'm ***.

sorry to reply you so late ,as i'm occupided in study recently.you asked me which school do i go to.now let me tell you my school is ***primary school.could u send me the picter whicn taken 1 years ago.the pic include you and my classmates.

if it is okay.you can regard me as a friend who can communicte.we can talk about things of 2 countries.

帮忙看一下格式,语法有没有错误
这不是信,是邮件来的,对方发给我的邮件的格式也不是像国内的信的格式(对方是英语国家的人)

我还是发原稿好,免得意思你们不明白

你好,我是XXX

抱歉,那么久才回信,因为最近学业比较忙.上次你问我是什么学校的,我现在可以告诉你,我是XX小学的.一年前你和我的同学拍的合照,能不能发给我?

如果可以的话,你可以把我当成一个倾诉的对象,让我们交流两国的东西.

-XXX

虽然不是书面的信件,但是e-mail也是要注意格式的,我和美国的一个老师交流时也是用的标准格式:
开头一定要用Dear XXX. 结尾一定要有落款,注意礼貌用语,毕竟不是很熟悉。
Dear XX,
Firstly, I should express my appologies to you for my delay in writing back to you. Because I have been occupied with my study recently, I have'nt got much time. Sorry!
You asked me that which school I attend in the last letter, and the answer is XXX Primary School.
Can I ask you to do me a favor? Do you remember the picture you and my classmates taken last year? Could you please sent me a copy? I really want to have one.
I'm so glad to write to you, and if it is ok, you can see me as your friend, we can talk through e-mails about every aspect, such as things of our two countries. What do you think? I'm looking foward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Your sincerely
XXX

1) sorry to reply [to] you so late

2) as I'm occupied [with] study recently

3) you asked me which school i [went to].

4) coul