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题目:The advantages and disadvantages talking a part-time job for student.
When you write an essay discussing the advantages and disadvantages of a topic:
.Separate your ideas into three paragraphs,one for advantages ,one for disadvantages and one to present your owm opinion.
.Write in a formal style.Do not use informal language and abbreviations.
.Use a variety of vocabulary and grammatical structures.
.Use linking words/phrases
谈一下学生兼职工作的利与弊
当你在写一篇文章谈论一个主题的利与弊的时候:
把你的看法分三段写,一段写利,一段写弊,一段表达你自己的观点.
用正式的文体写.不要用非正式的语言和缩写.
运用多样的词汇和语法结构
运用连接词和短语
Generally speaking, every coin has two sides.On the one hand,we have a lot of time to study by ourselves and thus improve weakness and furture develop strengths. On the other hand ,we can take part-time job and make ourselves better prepare for social life.
Some students fail to make good use of their time and they are addicited to various computer games. I am afraid that they are likely to ruin themselves in this way.
As far as I am concerned,I will try to make the best use of my precious time. I will spend most of my long-time studying English for I am very poor at it .In addition,I will take a part-time job as private teacher .By this means,I can earn some money and put my knowledge into practice as well
优点和缺点谈论了部分时间制工作的学生。当你写一篇文章讨论的优点和缺点的一个主题：分开你的意念转化成三段，一为优势，一为缺点和一本您的owm意见。 。写在一个正式的style.do不要使用非正式的语言和缩略语。 。使用不同的词汇和语法