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I'm looking forwards to the 29th Olympic Games and wish to contribute my own efforts to it. The exciting moment, Inever forget,when Beijing, the capital of China was proclaimed the finnal winner to host the Olympic Games in 2008 by chairman of the International Olympic Committee. Time flies ,and new Olympics is coming very soon.
As a college student, Firstly, I could give voluntary lectures to popularize Olympic knowledge and environment awarness in some residential areas.Secondly,Ialso will use my great enthusiasms to welcome the foreign friends.Finnally we should turn our patriotism into actions of studing hard ,working for the coming Olympic Games and improving ourselves to meet the needs of the country and people.
I believe that China will host a "successful,unique,and high-level Olympoaid."
谢谢大家 考试考完了 呵呵～～不过还是先来先得吧
I'm looking forwards to the 29th Olympic Games and wish to contribute my own efforts to it. The exciting moment, Inever forget,when Beijing, the capital of China was proclaimed the finnal winner to host the Olympic Games in 2008 by chairman of the International Olympic Committee. Time flies ,and new Olympics is coming very soon.
As a college student, Firstly, I could give voluntary lectures to popularize Olympic knowledge and environment awarness in some residential areas.Secondly,Ialso will use my great enthusiasms to welcome the foreign friends.Finnally we should turn our patriotism into actions of studing hard ,working for the coming Olympic Games and improving ourselves to meet the needs of the country and people.
I believe that China will host a "successful,unique,and high-level Olympoaid."
谢谢大家 考试考完了 呵呵～～不过还是先来先得吧
wish--wishing
I never-- which I will never
environment--environmental
Ialso will --will also
needs --need
另外，个人觉得 contribute my own efforts to it改成make contributions to it 更好~~
I'm looking forwards to ——I'm looking forward to
wish to — wishing to
I could give—— I can give否则与后面时态不符。
Finnally——Finally
successful,unique,and high-level Olympoaid——a successful green, high-tech and people's Olympics.绿色，高科技，人文奥运是北京奥运的三大理念么！！！