请教一个英语写作

我最喜欢看的电视节目是新闻联播,因为它能把每天的重大事件及时播放,让我足不出户就能知道天下事.而且是我学习标准普通话的好地方,所以每天我都会准时收看.
I like to watch the TV news network, because it can play every day a major event in a timely manner, let me know that the world will be able to homes. But I am learning is a good place for the standard of Putonghua, so I will be on time every day to watch

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Which TV program do you like best?
I like Outlook. (希望英语杂志中央台的节目) Because it can teach me how to learn English well.
We know that English is an important language in the world, and we learn it everyday. But I think to learn a language easily is an important aspect. This TV program has professional anchormans, a boy and a girl. When we watch this TV program, they will teach us some popular and professional expression and words. Not only can you use the expression and words in your oral English, but also you can use them in your writing.
In conclusion, I think Outlook is a good TV program.

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