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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/30 21:09:36
这是原文:
现代技术的进步以计算机技术的进步为代表。不断革新的计算机技术, 从各个层面上影响着、引导着各行各业的技术更新。基于计算机技术的虚拟仪器系统技术正以其不可逆转的力量推动着测控技术的革命。虚拟仪器系统的概念不仅推进了以仪器为基础的测控系统的改造, 同时也影响着以数据采集为主的测控系统传统构造方法的进化。虚拟仪器的出现, 彻底改变了传统的仪器观, 开辟了测试计量技术的新纪元。本论文阐述虚拟仪器的概念、发展现状及其前景。介绍了LabVIEW 的功能与使用方法。并用它制作了示波器，函数波形发生器，频谱分析仪等基本应用，并在最后得出了虚拟仪器相对于传统仪器的优势所在。
本文采用虚拟仪器技术中应用最广泛、功能最强大的LabVIEW 8.2软件设计。虚拟仪器相对传统仪器，具有编程直观简单，易于操作；价格、开发和维护费较低；功能用户自定义并可扩展；技术更新周期短；可网络化测试等优点。
虚拟仪器技术作为计算机技术与仪器技术相结合的创新技术，应用前景十分广泛。目前，虚拟仪器在实验教学、科学研究、远程教育中发挥着巨大的作用。利用虚拟仪器构建虚拟实验室被认为是有广阔前景的事业。现在，虚拟仪器技术在发达国家的应用已非常普及，而我国基本上还处于传统测试仪器与计算机互相分离的状态。因此，从引进国外先进的虚拟仪器技术和产品人手，大力推广虚拟仪器的应用，无论对加速发展我国自己的电子仪器工业，还是提高我国的测试技术水平都是极其有益的
这是GOOGLE译文:
Modern technological advances in computer technology, represented progress. Innovation in computer technology, from all levels of impact, guiding the technological upgrading of various sectors. Based on computer technology of virtual instrument systems ....
GOOGLE翻译很牛,但还是会存在错误
希望哪位达人帮我修正下
由于字数限制了，GOOGLE译文没全打出来。
但大家都知道了，故省略了。

The computer technology represents development in modern technology. The ever-evolving computer technology helps revolutionize every aspect of production techniques in every other field. The virtual instrument technology that based on computer technology now is promoting reforms on measurement and control technology by the powerful force. The concept of virtual instrument technology not only promotes the improvement of measurement and control system based on instruments, but also affects the revolution of the traditional structure method of monitoring and control system with mainly data collection. The emergence of virtual instrument, completely changed the idea of the traditional instrument, opened a new era of measurement and control technology. This paper includes introducing of the concept of virtual instrument technology and bus technology, summarizing of the characteristics and application of virtual instrument, discussing of the current situation and prospects of its developm