关于my teacher的英语小短文

She is humorous and also plays all sorts of games with us in class.We like her very much because she is not only our teacher, but also our friend forever. Although she is strict with us during the class, she is always with a smile on her face. Her class is always lovely and interesting.

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My English teacher is XXX. She is young and nice. She has big eyes, a small mouth and a round face.She is humorous in class. Playing all sorts of games with us in class, she enjoys tremendous popularity among all the teachers. We like her very much because she is not only our teacher, but also our friend, for ever and ever.

Although she is strict with us during the class, she is always happy with the smile on her face. Her class is always lively and interesting.

My English is XXX. She is young and nice. She has big eyes, a small mouth and a round face.She is h